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RE: ADSactly Poetry - A Collection of Short Poems to Inspire (Part 2)

in #poetry5 years ago

Interesting texts (I wouldn't call the three poems in the strict sense, just the first one). They could enter the general field of poetry, but we must not forget that the condition of "poetic" as some author says, supposes the aesthetic recreation of the world by the configuration of language (which does not mean rhyme, of course). Excuse the antipathetic professorial observation...
The journey and the traveller are two archetypal figures of the most appreciated (One of my favourite poems speaks of the journey: "Ithaca" by Constantin Cavafys). You work very well that figure, which appears as an almost immaterial being, a visitor bearer of spiritual grace, a kind of nomad of the soul.
His reflective texts deal with substantial aspects with a vision of life of inclination towards simplicity and freedom, with which I agree.
Thank you for sharing, @zentalk.

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I'd agree @josemalavem. I'd say the second piece was more of a rant / a lucid journal entry while in a state of mind I wanted to share. I'm happy you felt that the traveler was sort of mythical , a dream figure, the embodiment of unattached joy. Or at least that was one way he could be interpreted.

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