You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: December GardenView the full contextjosediccus (75)in #poetry • 6 years ago Short and spiky verses this is really awesome your lines are well dotted with richness your rhymes are awesome too
thanks Jose - the shorter lines can produce a more mediative state - that seems paradoxical to some but it's like using shorter, one or two syllable words, to slow down the pace