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RE: Inner Static (I.I. Part 1)

in #poetry6 years ago

Tarry not,
accentuator of dying mores.

Your vocabulary construction and sophisticated use of it takes my breath away, besides this is the longest piece you've written on steemit, wow this one is sweet

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Hey @josediccus good to hear from you! I wrote this poem by recording my voice on my phone on my recent long drive. I'm glad you like it. I actually wrote several pieces this way and I'll be posting them in the next few days.

I think some other pieces I've written are longer, even Goldilocks' Discontent is, I believe :-)

I just saw Goldilocks' Discontent and I believe so too, your pieces reaches beyond the limitation of verse I felt this one was more versey lol. It's definitely because it's recorded that's why it seems long to me, I'll really love to hear it uploaded here though. Cheers @d-pend!

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