IMMORALITY (An Original Poetry) [Day 16]
unfading as the blushing meadows.
In the deep cascades;
youthfulness imbued,
your soul unhampered and hued.
even with the passing of age.
like grey haired clouds on the horizon of the sun.
your spotless dental does remain untampered
You're bathing in life after life.
Like the Ra's agul.
Seen dozens of empire cripple with wrinkles.
travelled the elasticity of existences.
Incapable of true love.
deprive of the sweet death of old age
basking in the tender embrace if your children.
Ascension;
I can see assumptions of unwondering wonders.
you are blessed with a curse.
to nurse unbridled anxiety.
living with a purpose to purposefully exist out of tune.
You're a fading flute furiously flowing with harmony.
trampled with immortal life.
To forever see the earth rise and fall, fall and rise.
Your guilt is like a castle
Unflinching,
flooding you like an immature apocalypse.
even beneath the blessings of primal young ages.
your mind is dying
Made like plastic as you scourge the face of the earth.
Blessed with the sweetness of a curse.
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beautiful and has a very deep meaning
This is creativity in action. Great poetic piece. Thanks for sharing @josediccus.
This part makes me contemplate the meaning of life. nice work, friend!
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It is so important to 'carpé diem' (sp!?) I love poetry! Great work and bravery to submit this @josediccus 🙏
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This is a piece of art. I read and reread several times. Very impressive to me.
I liked how the idea of "most men defiantly live through the ages moving, breathing, working, toiling, having fun and laughing, yet.. are they truly living?" is played with in your poem. Great word art with a deep meaning, thanks for sharing!