Nice! I like it :D Not sure how this poetry challenge works, but my first steemit post is a poem about the spirit waking up while the body is not. Your morning song reminded me of it!

I woke up this morning but I didn't wake up
Just lying paralyzed on my back in the bed
Like clinically dead but alive in my head

https://steemit.com/escape/@jonasontheroof/sleep-paralysis-ego-trap-what