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RE: 30 Day Haiku Challenge Day 30: Not the End
Lovely poem! I like the hope and possibility that is expressed both in the words and the picture.
This poem reminds me of the saying that every closed-door is a new beginning, like every ending really is just something else starting.
Thank you for sharing this, and for continuing with your challenge.
If possible, I would revise the middle sentence, or line, as the first part seems a little bit off and difficult to read. I had to read it 3 times to make sure I knew what it said.
I love the concept! Keep it up
Thanks @jocelynlily for stopping by! I haven't thought yet of something to replace the middle sentence.