Poem (hidden love))

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)

It is my true experience of my real friend. And I was been able to make this poem For his Love story.

My Original Poem hosted by @margaretwise

Composition! By @jie28

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Hidden love.

I first met you.
I love my darling,
I'm taken care of your beauty,
but because of my weakness.
I feel like you're just cold. And the day, the week, and the moon are gone,
the more flourish, I love you,
it strikes me in my heart. But be ashamed to confess it,
because you might be angry and I'll be ashamed. And soon,
there was a young man who introduced himself,
and at the time he had begun to love you.
I am jealous,
because I would always be with you on every walk and with you my beloved.
But I'm weak.
If I can feel my feelings in my heart that
I love you and that I have heard that you're already married,
I still woke up to love my love for you.
And I'm so amazed
because you've always been waiting to tell her my feelings.
I'm sorry for what I found out.
I love you too, and you just wait.
But now it's too late, because she will commit to her boyfriend.
Love hidden love, it's too late to express, because of the weakness
I am now alone in the streets. I'm crying for love that I've kept hiding.
To the woman who just waits for true love.
But no one left me, so my advice to those who read it,
your love is hidden.
Express and declare to your beloved woman,
while not all too late because
it is painful to fail because of the cowardice I am experiencing,
So let's just say goodbye I'm guided
by your salutation of my love that
I almost died.

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great poem sir

Thank you

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hala galing a

hihihihi thanks

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