While I enjoyed this poem a lot, I chose not to upvote because you already published this online years ago at https://www.sumayyahsaidso.com/2011/10/rage-the-video/. Your poetry is awesome and I hope you will publish the newest poems here first because we need original creations here first. If they have already been published on another website, that brings the rank of the entire website down a little bit in Google because of the duplicate content.