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RE: Student Driver (Original Poetry featuring the art of @ankapolo)

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

Lovely haiku that you need to force yourself to read everything to "feel" the ambiguity, though it's in the form of 5/7/5. There is no pause for every line that's how you really need to consider reading it over and over again. Lol! Thanks sunravelme!

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Thank you! It's not quite a traditional haiku, as those are generally about nature- I was just playing with the structure, not the content.

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