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RE: Beautiful Illusion

in #poetry7 years ago

We believe in ideals as we look at the stone bridges of the digital oasis

i read this line over and over again. its kind of a gem hidden in the poem because the poem is talking about love and ethereal things, and then this line stood out to me because i realize the implications of it. alluding to the powerful outreach that even our own beloved steemit allows - a stone bridge in a digital oasis. im not sure if thats what you were alluding to but thats where my mind went. the internet is a wealth of information and in many ways a digital land of opportunity.

i also like the play between something so archaic as "stone bridge" and something as abstract as a digital oasis. really nice line and loved your poem!

i like to play with ideas of technology and love as well in many of my poems! :)

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