The Conqueror Love #Original Poem

in #poetry8 years ago

Dear My Lovely Steemians,


I'm back again in steemit community with new content, Content I currently associated with the Poetry of Life Shadow


My soul is crushed to make sense of taste
Despite the glowing eyes speak
tongue-tied and speechless
silent without words

Your face is etched so strongly gripped
Still ringing thousands stab your sweet soul
To her, her and them

Your love has destroyed clots dark red heart
Not possible to remove all carved
The sculpture of love so deep
However ... all only appearance

You have conquered me
conquered my body and soul
I'm fragile ... I lose ... I fall ..
I was lying on the dry reeds

Made false affection eroded
Hope you're throwing away empty
You made me shattered into pieces.

Hope has vanished
my body lulled by the evening wind in the reeds arid pedestal.

Now all is over
goodbye love
I hope I find your relief



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love sometime gives you joy and pain, goodbye is the end of temporary pain. so deep bro!

hahaha ... it's just a piece of fiction, it might be different if in real life

Thank you @silvia, but nyo hana can sagai

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