Yearning

in #poetry6 years ago

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Greeting Steemian's

In the silent lake
knotted shadows
closed meeting
glittering light
my eyes closed shut the shadow
myself just gaping
hurrying for shadows to disappear
but all the false though faint
only wistful wailing
about my longing


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[IDN]

Di tengah telaga sunyi
tersimpul bayang-bayang
rapat tertutup
cahaya berkilauan
mataku terpejam menghilangkan bayangan
diriku hanya ternganga
bergegas mencari bayangan sirna
namun semua semu walau samar
hanya ratapan sayu menerawang
tentang kerinduanku



Regards,
@iamrifk

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Subtle poem, nice to see it is bilingual one as well. I am writing poems both in my native Polish and in English, so i can relate to it easily. Upvoting.

thanks very much my broo for your appreciation

Welcome :) .

salam, selamat hari raya fitri juga 🙏

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Kerinduan dan ratapan jiwa yang bercahaya dalan kata-kata.

Selamat Idul Fitri:

Salam @mpugondrong

minal aidin walfaizin juga 🙏🙏🙏

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