Mine-Original Poem #10
Hello again, it's poetry time once again...
Mine
Here
I lay
Locked inside
My mind
Thoughts intertwine
Lost again
In depths
Of my own head
Deprivation of Divine
Trapped
In between the walls
Of my personal
Little Nightmare
Once more
But i feel fine
This is nothing
That I haven't
Felt before
I will
Own It
It's mine.
When I don't want to share what's bothering me. I can't explain it because I don't understand it, but I accept it and learn to live with it.
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Mine thoughts intertwine deprivation of divine but I feel fine it's mine.
Great work
Welcome To Steemit ⭐️ Beautiful Poetry
Thank you so much, I appreciate it <3
Hi flow ;) You are talented, do you see someone poet? I think you should do!
Hey, thank you soooo much. I am not sure what you are asking me though.
I mean show your poems to a poet to guide you.
Ohhh, thank you for the suggestion. I am active on some poetry sites, but that's about it.
being active in poetry sites is necessary but not enough. if you want to waste your talent, don't see any poet! you should receive customized advises.
I don't know, I just want to keep this casual, I write to express my feelings, I don't really want or need to make a career out of poetry. This is like a hobby to me. But thank you for your suggestion nonetheless.
You are awesome I love your poetic writing, Welcome to Steemit. I am featuring you in my latest Poetry curation post that I do daily. You can see it here: https://steemit.com/poetry/@rensoul17/winter-s-poetic-messengers-day-5
I like your poets, and you feelings.
go on! ;)
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