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RE: Corresponding Rhetoric- Original poem - 100 days poetry challenge- Day 24

in #poetry7 years ago

I love this stanza...

You are not a gentle breeze,
you are a hurricane wind:
You remove the hairstyle to my soul!

Especially that last line ha! Great depiction of how much movement and even destruction these 'strong winds' can cause it our lives.

Wonderful writing as always!

With Love
Hart Floe Poet

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Grateful with your reading and comment, dear @hartfloe.

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