I love it. Really vivid imagery conjured up here in your words. You really took me to the scene!

I also love the recurring tagline. To me it serves as a reminder - for we should all be marveling at the magic every single moment, for we are forever engulfed by it!

Wonderful piece... I'm not good at critiquing... but I can tell you I enjoyed this one very much :)

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
♥