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RE: DAY 1 OF 100 DAYS POETRY CHALLENGE: TEARDROPS OF THE WAR TORN, GRIEF STRICKEN CHILD.

in #poetry6 years ago

This is amazing... extremely powerful poem, and such an important issue to raise and talk about.

This really pulls at the heart strings, and your reminder to us all to love is what really made this whole thing so potent in it's delivery of the message.

Reach out with love then, in whatever way you can, show love to a child, wipe the tears of a child and give a child hope for tomorrow.

Thank you for this my friend. I hope that you will continue to write everyday and contribute to this contest with more quality entries like this.

Keep up the great work.

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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Thank you so @hartflow i really really like how you have your way with words.
Yes, the issue is important, but sadly it is sidelined maybe because humanity is begining to think that is the normal. Nothing however, is normal about subjecting a child to horrors better left unsaid.
You just have to watch clips of Syria and see what is happening. Pathetic.
Thank you for caring to comment. I think i have a friend in you. Thank you.
Yes, i hope to continue writing everyday. So help me God. Lol

Honestly... I can't bare to see it. I haven't watched the News in about 6 years because I feel it's designed to give you a daily dose of fear and despair each day to keep people trapped.

But I am aware of what's happening. I feel like I am on my path to help... in my own silly little way...

and I can see that you are too brother.

With our words we can change this world.

You definitely have a friend in me :) We're here doing this together!

Let's not stop till everything is better yeah? ;)

Keep up the great work. Hope you enjoy my blog too over the time we spend here.

With Love
Hart Floe Poet
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Wow, thank you Friend.
I just saw the amazing poem you wrote, you certainly are an expert aren't you?
I love the message, too.
Determination conquers all hence theres no challenge or obstacle that is unconquerable.
Thank you.

Thank you so much for your words. You are a wise man! That's easy to see. I think this is gonna be a very special journey that we all take together in this contest... magic is happening... gold will appear!

It already is -

Determination conquers all hence theres no challenge or obstacle that is unconquerable.

Truth written right there my friend!

Keep it up man. Can't wait to read more :)

With love
Hart Floe Poet
<3

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