I like your pairing of the sun and the moon. It makes me think of the fact that the moon is only visible to us because it reflects the sun's light. Good job!
I like your pairing of the sun and the moon. It makes me think of the fact that the moon is only visible to us because it reflects the sun's light. Good job!
That aspect of the moon is so fruitful for poetry, but it rarely sees mention in this sense. I'm glad I've found a fellow lover of that. If you look at The Ring, a few posts down, you'll see another stanza making use of said image and fact :)