5 Minute Freewrite: Friday - Prompt: Sunset
Tiny petals.
Tiny petals that fly.
Tiny petals that fly away to the wishes buzzing on pollinated dreams.
Intersect the bee with the mother while the child cries.
Endless crying
All day the many pains of past lives remembered from a highchair.
Karma in a sippy cup
Nectar dripping from chins, across spoons, pooling to the floor.
Where little black ants will crawl.
Tiny antenna communicate waving like magic wands.
By the thousands they congregate to eat the dried salt of infant tears wept from reincarnation.
Can insects remember?
Can they feel the wheel,
Cranking
Time
And magic?
A food chain from soul to worm.
Freed in soil.
Tiny puddles
Tiny puddles that dry
Tiny puddles that dry away in a sunset slicing the day that age wrinkles and cracks across flesh and Earth.
Golden like a mirror inside,
A drop of honey in a bucket,
Lowered down from Heaven.
I put my sunglasses on
To gaze at its beauty.
Time passing over the horizon.
The ants will outlive us all.
Thanks for visiting.
Writing for the steemit #freewrite challenge by @mariannewest
For more information:
https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-99-5-minute-freewrite-friday-prompt-sunset
Original artwork and poetry
2018 Charles Denton
I just wrote my first #freewrite piece here. Thanks a lot. :)
This is FANTASTIC. I especially love love love the intensely perfect visual you set up with this part:
Wonderful post. Thank you for sharing!
@byn
Thanks a mil. Think I might try writing for another entry. Fun stuff.
Wow!! What a poem! Welcome to the freewriters!!
Hello, and thanks.
Great job, I like this style of writing. Welcome to freewrite, you did a great job, keep them coming. 👍
Hey thanks!
@ghostfish This is great. Can I join the challenge, too?
Yep, check it out, join the party: https://steemit.com/@mariannewest
Great contribution to the freewriting community. We hope you have more to share. I am the proud bringer of today's landmark prompt.
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Oh man, #100, no pressure.
Glad you joined us.
Love the poetry versions of freewrites. Especially yours.
Thanks so much.
I like your hints to oriental religious elements, and the ants with magic wands! Welcome and keep freewriting!
Merging the elements and concepts... Thanks
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