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RE: 'Purple Joe' ~ Poetry referencing the film "Joe Vs the Volcano"

in #poetry7 years ago

laugh as she leaps in..... laugh as you leap in - I like the repetition and alliteration of those lines

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Thanks @geke!

  • If you look closely - you can see the poem inverts - as the lines approach the middle of each stanza they begin repeating words/references from their corresponding lines back out to the end...what do you think?

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