It keeps bothering me how Steemit just isn't wide enough to account for wide lines, and in the case of poetry, people often think it's a line-break I meant :(
This piece has punctuation for all line-breaks.
And thank you, I know that repetition is often frowned upon, but in this piece, most of the "at" and "to" and such that were left in, as well as that line in particular, were done so to draw things on. To give things time.
And I'm glad you liked it! And the power, well, it's my most personal piece yet, poetry or prose wise. And my longest too. It had to come out.
Actually, there's no line-break there.
It keeps bothering me how Steemit just isn't wide enough to account for wide lines, and in the case of poetry, people often think it's a line-break I meant :(
This piece has punctuation for all line-breaks.
And thank you, I know that repetition is often frowned upon, but in this piece, most of the "at" and "to" and such that were left in, as well as that line in particular, were done so to draw things on. To give things time.
And I'm glad you liked it! And the power, well, it's my most personal piece yet, poetry or prose wise. And my longest too. It had to come out.