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RE: Revolution
What do you mean by "borderline," Jeremy? Though yes, the paragraphs play off of one another, and continue one another :)
And what came out of the shell? It sometimes wants back in. It's hard out here. Thank you, I really like the structure of this poem, one of the ones I like more. It's very structurally pleasing to me.
Borderline, as in, not wanting to be touched, but still wanting it.