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RE: "...And on the 8th Day" - More Old Poetry
Nice poetry. When I saw the topic as on the 8th day, I immediately remembered the creation story. I like the way you interwove the creation story with new words and phrases. Lines like 'he muttered' finally' which signifiesGods rest after 7days work, 'and sat back to view creation...' which signifies rest also, etc. Mehn this piece blew my mind. You are really gifted. Tanx
right on, thank you! i don't know why there's so much religious reference in a lot of my old poetry as i'm not even religious, but i'm glad you enjoyed it!
You welcome