ISABELLA (part 2)
I had the highest number of upvotes ever on Steemit on the part 1 of this poem, Isabella.
Thank you all for your contributions on it.. I will advise you read the part 1 first before reading this post so as to get the full picture of the poem.
Although I decided to write the last stanza of the part 1 for those who read it to quickly grasp and remember what was in part 1.
Here is the link for the part 1..
https://steemit.com/poetry/@gabeman/isabella-part-1
So now let's get down to business,,
ISABELLA (part 1 stanza 4)
I had no choice but to move towards her,
She stood still with an eye of curiosity,
Hello pretty, I am,
I am Isabella, she cuts in.
ISABELLA (PART 2)
How may I help you? she exclaimed,
Her words suddenly became vocabulary,
I couldn't look her in the eye,
I wish I was being swallowed by the ground.
Suddenly, my eyes were opened,
My feet stood firm,
Her vocabularies became sweetened flavour
And I looked her eye to eye.
Hey pretty, I am Gabriel,
Your appearance drew my attention,
Your beauty made me go crazy,
If I were God, you'd have been my wife.
Excuse me, you said your name was,
Her facial looks depicts her interest in me,
With her face filled with smiles,
She replied : I am ISABELLA!
THE END!!!
Thanks for your time, below are the analysis of the poem..
It's a 16 line poem I.e a "sonnet"
Enjambment was not present in the poem.
it's a romantic poem.
Figures of Speech
√√√ Stanza 1 Line 4 -- Oxymoron
√√√ Stanza 3 Line 3 -- Hyperbole
RHYME SCHEME
Stanza 1. -- aaab
Stanza 2. -- abcd
Stanza 3. -- abcc
Stanza 4. -- abbc
At this juncture, I say have a good time and happy new week!
I remain gabeman.
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