RE: [On Butterfly Wings] Thirty Day Haiku and Digital Art @brokemancode

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[On Butterfly Wings] Thirty Day Haiku and Digital Art @brokemancode

in poetry •  last year 

Congratulations on Day #30!

I really love the line in the wind, memories fly -- how it stands alone and also combines with line 3. But as a standalone line, it evokes all kinds of imagery...

  • Reminiscing
  • Letting go
  • Sudden, forced focus...like the "shit hits the fan" and all the silly distractions fall away and you focus on what matters

Thanks! 😊

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That does sound nice:) Thank you, fremen:)