I liked the poem @gidionline, it was really nice. A little advice though, next time break it into stanzas and verses, that way it'll have a better flow to it. None the less, it was a great poem.
I liked the poem @gidionline, it was really nice. A little advice though, next time break it into stanzas and verses, that way it'll have a better flow to it. None the less, it was a great poem.
Thanks brother.
I would work on it.