In arms came tide's deep inhale,
I stood, rooted, as earth pulled away,
burying my feet unto ankles breadth
and, with stone, bid us "please stay."
I love your choice of words and the way it gives a clearer picture of what you are painting. This reads too good to be called thrown together :) .
And thanks for your contributions at the poetry class, you are a joy to listen to. Your ideas are just lit, that word map you showed, i am hoping to do something similar on my next poem.
Thank you so much, @fego, I say thrown together, but I also kept editing it even after I posted and it went through some editing rounds even before.
And mate! you are so kind, absolutely honored that you saw value in some of the things I share. Always happy to help in any way, definitely feel free to reach out if you ever have any questions, my friend.