Haiku, image - Mizu no Oto Contest week #3

f3nix (59)in #poetry • 6 years ago (edited)

^{Photo credit @marcoriccardi}

Between sea and skies -
a lingering cormorant
bathes in the sunlight

Fra mare e cielo
due ali al sole estivo -
bagno di luce

世の中や蝶の暮らしも忙しき - 小林一茶

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6 years ago in #poetry by f3nix (59)

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bananafish (61) 6 years ago (edited)

The English and the Italian version could be considered two different haiku, you even moved the kireji.
I think the Italian one is more evocative and subtle, but both are very good

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f3nix (59) 6 years ago

Yes I agree.. but sometimes the translation is so difficoult.. I did well in telling you to consider the Italian one. From now onward I'll always put a note on which one is the original version.

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