A Tale of Two Heroes

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Two Heroes one kingdom
Ordinary men they once were
Till they consistently showed they care
Through actions guided with wisdom

The first is wise and noble
Second purehearted and kind
I certainly don't mind
Being blessed by the double

Funny they don't unite mights
Each embracing their vision
Having distinct missions
Preaching seperate truths

If I am forced to choose
There will be no choice to make
Accepting each for their sake
While letting their wisdom fuse

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Will pointing out an editorial correction trouble you?

    seperate -> separate

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Lol thanks for the correction

You may want to check the title of your post from a few days ago? ;)

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