A Sense of Ordinary

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

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Not as good
Not as nice
Not as pure
Not like you

As ordinary as they come
Mistakes like everyone else
One minute flying next at the floor
Just a jolly young lass understanding life

Never over living
Never over feeling
Never over needing
Never over loving

In hindsight looking like a plain chapter
Lifesong sends me reeling with laughter
Always hoping it gets better
While days go by even faster

Now accepting melody
Now accepting comedy
Now accepting tragedy
Now accepting anarchy

All chapters welcome as seasonal
Living as someone rational
While looking up to your character
To be cherished like a diamond

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