"The Long Bike Ride to Nowhere" - A poem

in #poetry7 years ago

I can’t feel my legs
They shake, they quake
They’re sturdy as soft boiled eggs
And with each breath I try to take
I’m inhaling my own sweat
And I guess that’s what you get
If you want your workout to work out
And the time is not up yet


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Enjoyed it though "sturdy as soft boiled eggs" is a bit weird... "wobbly as soft boiled eggs"? Greetings

Thanks and greetings to you too. I used the word 'sturdy' there to show how unsturdy my legs were but I can see how it might be a little odd :)

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Excelente poema amiga:)

Very motivational.

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