Desperate desire
He says his eyes are on fire
He says he desperately needs water
He just wanted to get together
He just needs his love forever
His hearty pretty love then spoke thereafter
She says he left her heart in pieces
She says our whole life was like a thesis
She says no way! she ain't eating her faeces
She says I'm not one of the people he misses.
She's just mad cause i love dickering
He's just a liar who loves bickering
Though i love his massive earnings
I wish he could just come to his lowly senses
And stop his futile advances
SOME PERKS
I don't know what i was thinking when i wrote this but, i do know i wanted to write something pretty simple, no very simple. I just wanted to rhyme and savor the feeling. But the headache i felt made me cut it short but it's still quite okay.
Like i said its pretty easy to understand but i kinda have this urge to explain more. So I'll start right away
It's about two couples. A guy and a lady (obviously) well they got separated. But the love he has for his then sweetheart hasn't melted yet. So he goes back to her and asks for forgiveness well still with his ego jacket on.
She on the other hand doesn't buy it, knowing the ungrateful jackass her former lover is. ( women are so annoying) i didn't say that her male lover did.
So she refuses him and tells him to go on with his life without her, saying she can never return to her past. He's not shaken and continues to pester her. Well that's pretty much what it's about.
This poem or rhyme isn't just for you to read only but to understand and also to learn from it. Most people just hop into relationships without thinking while some actually think but it still ends badly for them. How things will turn out we'll never know. But what i do know is, whatever we're doing. We should be really careful and cautious. Cause you never know, what the future will hold
my quill bleeds
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Thank you for this beautiful life poem.
Thank you for reading mr cordero i really appreciate it
The consistency with which you coin these mind-blazing poems is very commendable. This is yet another beautifully scripted poem. Your choice of words that are plain as day, makes it not only enjoyable but also highly fathomable. Congrats.
I truly appreciate your consistent visit to my blog. You're on of the people giving me the zeal to keep on writing and for that i thank you mr khojo
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