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RE: Steemit Poetry Contest #8 - Illusions Bind
Very nice! I love the short lines, I have trouble writing poems with short lines, but this one is amazingly tight!
Well done!
Very nice! I love the short lines, I have trouble writing poems with short lines, but this one is amazingly tight!
Well done!
Originally I tried to make the lines shorter so they'd fit without line wrapping, but then I liked that I could hold an entire quatrain in my head without having to re-read it. This made it a lot easier to find better words for the feeling or flow, and what you see above is the result.
Also, I just discovered Flash Fic was a thing and that might have a little to do with it.