Time is so elusive and seems to fall through our fingers even faster as we age. Your imagery is so powerful in this poem and your diction is perfect. The line that gets me is "...of ribs that have not seen love." Powerful. Thank you for inspiring me to pick up the pen again @torico.
thanks doghaus! I totally appreciate the feedback! I'm happy to inspire even one person :)
Thanks again @torico. We write because we have to but inspiring people is certainly a great spinoff. Looking forward to reading more of your work.