Writing from childhood , cool. I can’t remember anything I wrote then but I know I did write.
I liked the message of this poem , at first it seemed s but too ryhmy but it gets the message and image across well
Writing from childhood , cool. I can’t remember anything I wrote then but I know I did write.
I liked the message of this poem , at first it seemed s but too ryhmy but it gets the message and image across well
LoL! I get what you mean about “a bit too Rhymy”. But I wanted to stay true to the original pattern since it was the only poem I remembered from my childhood besides a few corny poems I wrote for my Mom.