You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Commute - HaikuView the full contextdmcamera (61)in #poetry • 6 years ago Great haiku. I like the unusual 4/7/4 rhythm. You chose a great image to compliment it too!
Glad you enjoyed the Haiku @dmcamera. I decided to edit the poem after I double checked my syllable count as I thought it might be better keeping to form. What do you think? Does it still work? Thanks for checking out my blog buddy
It works very well! Not everyone agrees with the 5/7/5 form though, so you didn't have to change it. But I do like it! 😋