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RE: SteemitPoetryContest #14 - VENGEANCE
I love the first and the second stanza. There was a bleak, brokenness and desperate feeling in the first two but you lost it by resolving those feelings, I feel. Nevertheless, good writing.
Thanks @deadsparrow. leaving it on a tense note would have been better. but I'm addicted to character development even in poetry lol. Glad you liked it.