Falling Camellia :: Haiku of Japan #41steemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)


つばき落ち鶏鳴き椿また落ちる
tsubaki ochi tori naki tsubaki mata ochiru


a camellia falls
a rooster crows
another camellia falls
—Baishitsu


(Tr. David LaSpina)

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(Print by Hirokazu Fukuda)

In this poem from Buson, I told you about how camellia make a plunk sound that is quite audible in a quiet area. Plunk may be right, as it is a small sound, but it is more like a small thud. That may be the sound the old Japanese were thinking of when they heard it, for the falling of a camellia flower was often likened to a beheaded samurai's head hitting the ground.

Whether that is the case in this haiku from Baishitsu, I will leave to you.


Don't miss other great haiku in the Haiku of Japan series!

#1–10 — Haiku of Japan :: Collection #1
#11–20 — Haiku of Japan :: Collection #2
#21–30 — Haiku of Japan :: Collection #3
#31 — Am I a Butterfly or a Man?
#32 — Hidden Grey Hair
#33 — Sleeping Butterfly
#34 — Never To Grow Old
#35 — From Dog to Cat
#36 — Short Night
#37 — Silent Moon
#38 — Temple Pine Needles
#39 — Nothing and Everything
#40 — Stubborn Scarecrow


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Nice haiku dear

Thank you :)

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