Wolf
~
The moon in your eyes
Shows the truth
Don't make me choose
I'm drawn to your darkness
You know me better
You've broke down the brick walls I set
One bite is all I desire
To be sired to you forever
Make me beta than I was
Your protection I crave
My fur angel
Let me fly blissfully under your radar
I choose your warmth
Your Howling in the silver moonlight
Makes me feel more alive
I dash to your call in a breath
~
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Wow I could feel the eerie feeling in the poem it's so intense, so beautiful wow honestly hahsha
Mans you always keeping with me. Thanks boss
Yeah, it was designed to be intense however mild on the surface of the reader.
Hahahaha of course buddy
Well this particular one is beautiful it's my type of poem, I love so tender poem as this yet so intense and amazing. I love it so much
The love and beauty found in the dark if you can stand firm in it.
You really have an art for poetry - one note Beta should be better.
Your command of English is excellent, thank you.
Hey @planetauto
Yeah, that's how I wanted it to suit to the warewolf theme of the poem. I would have added a line that suggest the Alpha. I felt satisfied with this. Do you think I shiuld leave it still as beta or I should just go with the English word better.
Thanks again guys
p.s I got a youtube notification of your latest car review. I will definitely check it out
Alpha that would have clinched maybe even Lycan 😃 no leave it as beta.
Thank you, thanks for the support here and yt
Make feel feel warmt in your arms cause am feeling cold...
#maxi