It's only a palace of dust

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

It's only a palace of dust


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The universe sweeps up the
shards of my messy art.

.
Particles in space.
Elements, simple
complex essences
Strewn & sewn into
A tapestry of my
hope and its
adversary.

.
A scoop hand falls from heaven
To remove bugs from my brain.

.
I am unborn,
Awaiting that
Moment of moments,
Suspended in promise.
I am swimming through
My own streaming blood,
Coursing electricity
In my gem nerves,
Spittle on the
Black water.

.
The earth gives way before me
And pulls my palace into dust.

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pen'd by
@d-pend
10/26/17


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@d-pend thanks for sharing your thoughts on the way things flow on the world with this poem. Upvoted. @gold84

By the way I did not here any comments from you in any of my latest posts. Looking forward to your thoughts when you have a chance.

Hi @gold84, thanks for stopping by! My apologies, I got so bogged down I never gave my perspective on borrowing delegated SP on your one article. Just did that now. Steemit seems to be working faster again recently, which is very good!

I don't see anyone doing it quite like you. Very elegant style and it just continues to grow on me. I look forward to your pieces daily. Thanks for being, creating, and sharing. Peace and blessings!

I really appreciate that @theruggle. Wow. Feeling the gratitude... feedback motivates me! Wholeness my brother

Amazing -unique -originaln-crazy beautiful - we look your poetry on the top of the stars. @d-pend

another wonderful poem sir!!! heavy words but you still use it lightly!

Creative writing at its finest.

An Amzing poem @d-pend !
I feel like i told about the law of univers, real beautiful art you did :)

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really cool, nice my friend

What I like about you @d-pend is that you are a free spirit who can tap into anything the universe has to give. You see all things from so many different perspectives and you express yourself in a vast and complex way to challenge those who encounter you. You give us many things to think about every time you write. There is so much deep within yourself that I don't think you will ever run out of inspiration and spirit to share with the world. Thank-you!!!

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