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RE: Family trips/Original poem [100 Days poetry challenge (Day 89, Poem 87)]
How should I say? Remember that I work with a translator. Thanks friend
How should I say? Remember that I work with a translator. Thanks friend
Just change her to his for the first line.
For the second, I would say: While the halogen lights shone through the windshield. But this is my suggestion. I am not certain what exactly you were trying to convey. My greatest issue is with the word repeated.
But because I have not read the original version, I maybe overstepping my boundaries.
Thanks for the suggestion my friend. As for halogen lights, the idea is that the lights of the opposing cars make us feel uncomfortable when they come from the front.