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RE: Limbo underwater - original poem-100 days poetry challenge-Day 20

in #poetry7 years ago

I rarely venture to let my thoughts even wander to walking a foot into the waves, let alone navigate the seas below them, @zeleiracordero.

This was quite the ambitious journey, some wonderful uses of imagery to transport the reader.

Some stanzas caught my attention more than others, and this one in particular was my favorite:

The sky refuses to light the streetlights, if the moon does not come out.
Nobody carries marine fireflies, that scares him and he gets lost.
No one tries to break the mutism that stifles silence,
that obscures a sun without roads.

Thank you for sharing.

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Thanks for the visit, my dear @carmalain. Yes, it is a challenge to try to share with the reader the vision from below the water, but I love the challenges and plunged into those waters. I appreciate your comment, friend.

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