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RE: SteemitPoetryContest #12 — "Wandering Years" (Original Poem)
the way you use your last stanza is brilliant and such a good way to tie everything together.
the space of, well... space, such a great metaphor for both the infinite possibilities and fear of the unknown inherent to an unknowable future, it's so great, mate.
strong stuff, Yahia, brilliant.
Much appreciated, @carmalain7! Yes, reading is an active sport and writing a collaborative one - this is how I feel as I read your warm response. Thanks, for lending poem your imagination & best of luck with your art!