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RE: Free Verse: The Power of Words
This is a fun piece, @vitkolesnik, the way you use imagery to craft your 'just as, so to' arguments makes the piece really stand out almost as a picture for the reader.
while your middle stanza harbors some of the best imagery - especially the boat gliding over the light shining off the water - it's that last line that holds so much power.
intangible, like a bird's line of flight.
the comma to set the pace for one of the best metaphors I've come across in a while - so good, my friend.
Thank you for sharing this piece, Vitaly, it feel like there is genuine truth and identity here.
Thank you for the appreciation and also for the help with crafting the words! :)