I can only imagine the rush of the wings—
Burning, limitless, wild.
Favorite lines of the whole poem. Really good imagery. I felt like I could feel it, and I'm not sure if that was your intention, but I could feel the wind and hear the sound of the feathers fluttering.
Hey @calanandino thank you for the comment sharing your favorite lines! I'm happy to hear it was vivid for you. One of my favorite parts of writing poetry is when the lines flow out freely, and that often happens for me in the concluding lines of a piece. It's like the ribbon being tied around a package, giving that finishing touch! :-)
P.S. Welcome to Steemit!!!