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RE: Atlas - 5 Minute Freewrite, Day 169

in #poetry6 years ago (edited)

Too bad Atlas can't get a good stretch and visit his daughters again. (Though, he had a bit of a break from Heracles when he went to fetch apples from Hera's garden. Perhaps he would have helped ease Atlas' burden for longer had Atlas not tried to trick him.) I wonder if by now, he's become dependent on the weight, like a prisoner behind bars for too long. If what holds him down has become the only thing that he remembers. Has Atlas forgotten to dream, to want to reach out?

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As always, your perspective is clever and caught the message of the poetry.. I think that the skies stay up very well by themselves, just Atlas needs it more than the heavens do. (Btw.. changing topic.. on the pic dont forget to put "original photo by the author".. lol I'll stop bugging you for real now) 😜☺️

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