My Entry for the Steemhive Poetry Contest: My Last First Kiss From You.
should you wish to partake in this great competition, hosted by @steemhive click here on the entry post.
My Last First Kiss From You.
I can still recall the scented summer breeze that filled the night-time air
And in my mind, vividly clear, I can see you standing there.
The willow leaves swayed back and forth, as if dancing to a tune
To the rhythm of beating hearts, and the pining of the moon.
You drew me close, I breathed you in, the yearning was severe
There was no doubt that my love for you was blatantly sincere.
Then as our lips, in firm embrace slowly intertwined,
I could feel each perfect moment of that night, engraved into my mind.
My soul cried out to touch your heart amidst passionate soft sighs
Interrupted only by the moments when, we got lost in each other’s eyes.
Nightly hours stumbled on, while you crept deeper ‘neath my skin
And with no will left to resist, I had to let you in.
We fell asleep in each other’s arms against starlit willow bark
So, came the end to that lovestruck night, and Kissing in the dark.
Now remnants left of youth and spring, still at that dancing branches hides,
For the luminescent morning sun exposed to me, your absence by my side.
such a visual poem! really wonderful word imagery!
i didnt know about this contest before but i will definitely check it out because i write as well :)
great writing - keep it up!
Thank you so much!
Yes, I love these types of competitions, they keep me on my toes :)
https://steemit.com/contest/@moneyinfant/steemit-writing-contests-issue-24-february-18-2018
If you would like, the link above is a daily post listing all the writing competitions, it will help you find all the writing comps in one place.
Hope that helps,
Have a great day!
oh thats amazing! thanks so much for sharing the link!:))
My pleasure, I hope to see you around in the participation section!
:)
Oh wow, your words literally paint the picture!
Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
A brilliant poem with brilliant flow!
Well done!
Thank you! I am glad you liked it!
Yoh!😢 What an incredible night!
So much passion and love
Under the moonlight and stars shining from up above
You're souls merged into one as you slowly kissed
Only to wake up alone as she has disappeared into the mist
😯
haaaa, yes indeed!
At least that romance was merely a fiction of my vivid imagination!
I think if a guy actually had to do something like that to me I would track him down and make sure his knees hurt enough, so that he is not able to do the same to the next girl...
:P
:joy: . Okay I did not expect that response. That is so funny. If I could go into the future, I would warn the guy who would want to propose you to come prepared for marriage when approaching you if he values his knees.
You have a beautiful imagination.
hahaha It's not that bad!
Ah, thank yo so much!
Lol. Maybe not.
It's a pleasure