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RE: SteemitPoetryContest #13: A Life Lesson
Wow, brutal and seductive... these are some dark witches!
I know, rhymes are not usually my thing in poetry either... but I did have fun with this contest and ended up being glad for the rhyme requirement, it pushed my envelope.
I think you did a brilliant job with the rhymes. These would make awesome heavy metal lyrics!
thank you! I cannot say I did not struggle. Especially at the second stanza. I kept restructuring it and rewriting it until something actually rhymed. I cannot believe people do ABAB or AABB rhymes. they're even harder and would make me sweat so much. It is good though, that it pushes our envelopes - we grow that way.
Thank you. And for the heavy metal lyrics... not too familiar with the genre, but if anyone wants to turn it into music, feel free lol
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