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RE: The Daily Poem! #1 - Welcome
Thanks @carmalain7! Great feedback, I'm particularly glad to know that the ending was surprising :)
I'm fascinated by those moments of cognitive dissonance in my own internal experience, when I thought I understood the meaning of a thing, but it turns out to be something very different. Having a little bit of that right now, clearly :D
I can't get enough of that moment when confusion manifests epiphany, which to me is the essence of poetry.
As for the part about insults, it's interesting, that came to me last, after the straitjacket and the seat on the bus. I wanted a kind of cruelty that could become familiar, be woven into the fabric of daily life, and insults fit perfectly. So your commentary on that seems particularly relevant.