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RE: If words could kill and steel could speak (Original poem)
I read this one and your other two. This one especially had some great ideas. Keep it up.
I read this one and your other two. This one especially had some great ideas. Keep it up.
Thank you. I appreciate your readership. I'll keep on writing. Thanks again.
Also, if one of the other poems you checked out was Hate Your Enemy, were you able to see the message in the image? Just curious.
Yep I think I got it, though I'm not 100% sure. Hate is your enemy? I never want to assume I understand a thing completely.
By the way, I thought that you were brave to write that message. It reminded me of something similar of mine that I might share at some point....But, I think the message got in the way of your art just a bit, maybe? Just a little forced? Like maybe you tweaked your natural flow in order to not be misunderstood. It was still excellent regardless, but this one was phenomenal.
Yeah, that's true. I got a little spooked because I realized that I could be in danger of being misunderstood, which wouldn't be such a bad deal if it weren't for the risk of being downvoted. I'm not too concerned about being downvoted for stuff I actually say, but this was a situation where what I said was being misinterpreted to basically the opposite of what I meant. Which, in all fairness, was a little bit by design, but I saw no way to effectively shield myself from the consequences without being more explicit. Thanks for your honest input, I really appreciate it.