I'm glad you got that sense from it. Kind of what I was going for. These things take on a life of their own in the end, but circular life cycles/reincarnation; thematically somewhere around there! Thanks for the feedback.
Thats great, you translate those emotions well then. Indeed, everything is always circular but it manifest in different ways. Your welcome. Since I've started writing my poetry I've gotten a lot more out of reading others poetry. Keep up the great poetic creations^_^
I'm glad you got that sense from it. Kind of what I was going for. These things take on a life of their own in the end, but circular life cycles/reincarnation; thematically somewhere around there! Thanks for the feedback.
Thats great, you translate those emotions well then. Indeed, everything is always circular but it manifest in different ways. Your welcome. Since I've started writing my poetry I've gotten a lot more out of reading others poetry. Keep up the great poetic creations^_^